Determination

Determination

A Poem by Tricia Pattinson

Determination
by Tricia Pattinson

The Moon is ever changing
As a heart confused
And if too long waning
Depression finds its suit
But!, when determination enters
Fullness fills the World
And there goes trickery and deception, fleeing
Setting course for the darker side
For the Sun has no obstacle
When the Moon is full
And Truth's reflection buoys
That once wretched view
To sunny -
A most determined hue

© 2014 Tricia Pattinson


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Tricia Pattinson

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This beautiful poem feeds the imagination and
carries the mind far into the night , to soft beds,
tender lovers and social delight.
Thank you,
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tricia Pattinson

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave feedback.
This is just simply a delightful poem that leaves a mind to think up for days to come!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tricia Pattinson

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave feedback!
KATHY SUE SILLS

10 Years Ago

My pleasure
I loved this piece. It is very cleverly written and thought-provoking.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tricia Pattinson

10 Years Ago

Glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave feedback.

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Added on September 13, 2014
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