Brighter Days Bestowed Your Crown

Brighter Days Bestowed Your Crown
by Tricia Pattinson

The shine of your hair
Reminds me of white sheets
Sparkling in the Sun's warmth
Licking the light delightedly
My smile stretches across
Pinned to a measure of time
Like the white sheets billowing
In a memory
Of the blinding Sun
That brightened your hair
So white

Reviews

[Aprille]

The words are both deep and simple. I love this one. :)

[Blake Fodor]

A good piece of writing - showing so clearly the emotions, the doubt, that comes with this thing that we call love