Silvering Swirls

Love my silver tresses.

Silvering Swirls
by Tricia Pattinson

My hair swirls out and up
Electricity crackles through it
My silvering antennae sending and receiving
Fantastic this improvement
When rich hues of burning red
Gave way to colorless petina
My hair shimmers like the twinkling stars
And their whispers I now hear them

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Beautiful imagery. I could see the colors spinning and the shapes that your hair took. The depth of the words and the way they fit together was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Tricia Pattinson]

Thank you kindly.

[pinhead07]

Insightful and wonderfully written. Of the time when one delves into one's inner self, has a couple of conversations and what not, but they're more connected to the world around as well. It is this insight that then sometimes becomes the driving force - for good or bad.

[Blake Fodor]

This is a very intricate piece. I really rate this, it is honestly wonderful and written with insight. Awesome

[Rocans]

Fantastical and beautiful. I enjoyed it!