nice repeating stanza for a lullaby..would like to hear rest of it..you have good ideas..but they are too short..throw some more words on your page like emptying a paint can all at once on the poem..andy warhol style...
Makes you want to go 'awww', doesn't it?
Well then... Awwwwwwwwwwww =]
It was simple and short. So easy and free at the same time. Lullabies are a very crucial part of a young child's bed time. Mother gently sings and coos the core of her existence.
As I may quote a story a friend wrote "Travel the world and i assure you, you will never find a more pure form of love that a mother has for her child"