Don't Keep Me Lost

A prototype for a song i am working on... It is a country/ rock ballad.. and love is the subject ...... reuniting lost love.

 

 

Do not keep me lost my love.

Say a prayer and bring me home.

Take the emptiness away.

From the bottom of my heart.

I find the words to let it start.

All the dreams a man can have.

Are wrapped forever in your heart.

Wrapped forever in your heart.

It is so easy to walk by.

Just ignore my open wounds.

To trust in all the clichés given.

That time can heal every wound.

But these old scars they sure run deep.

Ran this poor man into the ground.

So don't turn my love aside.

Call me home to set me free.

Don't keep me lost not found.

Bring me home by love tonight.

 

All the dreams a man can have...
are wrapped forever in your heart..

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

its interesting that you seem to be writing from a male perspective ... or am i waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay off!? ... i think there is real strength in the story because of the long road to love implied ... deep scars and cliche's of love that suddenly all make sense ... reminds me of a summer afternoon reading a love poem to one i swooned for ... ;)
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[Falcon1]

This is so touchingly sweet romantically too stretches the heart beat of two a longing for love to bring it all home and rest ashore there will be no other Just you and your one lover.

[Falcon1]

Lovely in foreverness and giving the gift of love if forevermore and true the true love between a man and a woman will never make you blue.

[Violet's Run]

Hi Einstein Yes I wrote this from a male perspective.. because for some reason it just did not work any other way.. and what I was trying to get across came easier from a male view....
It is a good experience to write from another vantage point.. But I am glad that it is a brief visit to the male gender... I could not handle any much more in male land.... :)