Chaos

Chaos

A Poem by Violet's Run
"

Oh how it hurts to love and realize it may all be in vain

"

In every lover's voice 
In every lover's unbroken gaze
In each second that is the endless eternity
I will be there in answer to the question
I will be the Goddess that you seek
In this unholy world we cherish, all I can answer is my beating heart
All I can give is my life
Will that be enough to heal that wound 
the burning of incense is the aroma i smell
to cover the doubt of my failures
to cover the doubt of our dreams.

They say insanity starts with love
how true is that when i have never known you
Can it be said that there is hypocrisy in the God of love
the state of affairs in heaven is not kept secret
just as the attributes of humans and angels are shared
When I look up into the night sky I see my face,  and I am 
afraid.

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© 2014 Violet's Run


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Violet's Run
Be honest, Be true, and do not fear correction

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"They say insanity starts with love
how true is that when i have never known you"
The poem allowed the reader to feel the inner thoughts. The above lines were my favorite. I believe life is fair. We find what we need and if we are lucky. We can find some sort of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Violet's Run

10 Years Ago

Coyote poetry i like the way you get to the heart of a poem..and cut through the fat. You are so rig.. read more



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and they say drunks tell no lies ..but thats not true ;) talk about honesty ..i think this poem is full of it ..raw ... courageous look in the mirror and before the face of God ..and i say ..fear is exactly what we should feel ... the Bible reads something like this .. it is a fearful thing to fall into the hands of God ... i think your poem is beautiful ..thought provoking ..wisdom between the lines .. and very human
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"They say insanity starts with love
how true is that when i have never known you"
The poem allowed the reader to feel the inner thoughts. The above lines were my favorite. I believe life is fair. We find what we need and if we are lucky. We can find some sort of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Violet's Run

10 Years Ago

Coyote poetry i like the way you get to the heart of a poem..and cut through the fat. You are so rig.. read more
separate streams to follow...the second one seemed more "telling" to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Violet's Run

10 Years Ago

Thank you Chris for reading and commenting. I appreciate your taking the time and energy..
su.. read more

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Added on April 4, 2014
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Tags: love, endless, eterna., mirror, angels, stars, chaos

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Violet's Run
Violet's Run

san joaquin valley, CA



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My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..

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