No Trust Zone

No Trust Zone

A Poem by Violet's Run
"

What it feels like to lose trust in the one that you must have it in and from.

"

 

 

Can you see me?

 

Lost in the melody of misery

 

Standing on the shifting sands of platitudes

 

Do not bother with formality

 

For certain do not stand on any ceremonies endorsed by heaven or

hell

 

Because you are on your own in this

 

I will not follow you down the road of self destruction

 

I have worn that road into the china syndrome you know what I mean

 

Forever Trust in who you are?

 

That is what my daddy  told me and he is the only ma I trust

 

And he passed away ten years ago, so that leaves me and you

 

In the enormous genre of the no trust zone

 

 

 

© 2014 Violet's Run


Author's Note

Violet's Run
easy gong straight forward poems try hot aking elegant

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the beginning is excellent, with a provocative question, I see a systematic rhythm flows through out the poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on February 22, 2014
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Tags: trust, love, faith, disillusion, fear, illusion, lies, honor, humility, reason

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Violet's Run
Violet's Run

san joaquin valley, CA



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My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..

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