Man, ALWAYS blew me away readin this, one of my favorite write, all time...
This really says everythin that like to hear, an read, also like the part, "You will have to know the answers to the questions she will ask you, you will have to be ready to ride the whirl wind" Oh my Lord, that is a classic kind of Sassy, strong, an straight forward, not at ALL like the princesses that read in the stories, that is a Brilliant twist, dark an lovely... wolf
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
eddie my friend I miss your good humor and your warm comments.. I miss the life and the energy. I am.. read moreeddie my friend I miss your good humor and your warm comments.. I miss the life and the energy. I am trying to make it work without it andI I have to say i am not doing too welll
check out my message on DUP. susan
such longing ... broken too many times one lies in the wastelands ... i am glad you ended this with that spark of hope .. waiting is not easy for sure ... enjoyed reading and experiencing your poem ..it is quite emotive for me ...
E.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
hi Einstein , this poem shows my true self.. more than I care to admit.. it reflects a situation and.. read morehi Einstein , this poem shows my true self.. more than I care to admit.. it reflects a situation and a relationship aftermath really and yet she is being as honest as she can ...it still is a wind of change.. but I love to ride motorcycles .. so the monster had better get there..hehe
Man, ALWAYS blew me away readin this, one of my favorite write, all time...
This really says everythin that like to hear, an read, also like the part, "You will have to know the answers to the questions she will ask you, you will have to be ready to ride the whirl wind" Oh my Lord, that is a classic kind of Sassy, strong, an straight forward, not at ALL like the princesses that read in the stories, that is a Brilliant twist, dark an lovely... wolf
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
eddie my friend I miss your good humor and your warm comments.. I miss the life and the energy. I am.. read moreeddie my friend I miss your good humor and your warm comments.. I miss the life and the energy. I am trying to make it work without it andI I have to say i am not doing too welll
check out my message on DUP. susan
very beautiful and thought provoking, the first line itself has the capacity to render the rest of the poem.The images so beautiful and connecting to the main idea. all the best
sayed
My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..