Are You Lying?

I can see the sunlight shining there

The darkness brilliant in her hair

The day is bright, the night is dying

Say you love him--are you lying?

The smile lost was found again

Does that validate the end?

Leave her broken, leave her crying

Say you love him--are you lying?

He tells you secrets as they scare him

And guilt still pricks him when you dare him

Faithless one is he even trying?

Say you love him--are you lying?

Do you act his age or does he act yours?

Speak of planes and open doors

Lose yourself to dreamy sighing

Say you love him--are you lying?

Patience is the slowest killer

Your plans of leaving do not thrill her

Say you'll return but she's not buying.

And if you love him are you lying?

Reviews

[Quill]

i like this poem, some parts rhyme, and i like how it always goes back to "say you love him...are you lying"

[Shanelle Morgana]

Thank you for your review.