Heads or Tails

The power of prayer

she wields with her tongue

Passion and fury

Popping off like a gun

His lack of effort

Her now barrel filled ammunition.

Heads or tails?

Life or death

The greatest gift

Heads or Tails

To make sense of this...

Do Not Cross

Spelled out in black and yellow tape

Gun smoke lingers

Love lost and fought through abattle of words

She shot many bullets but all it took

Was no, I don't love you anymore.

Reviews

[Mr. L.D.]

To (LC) This is a strong peice,I would hate to be your ememy. If he has hurt you that bad please don't reload.Yes! The power of prayer is the life line of happiesness,and wasted loads being crushed.Keep popping those hollow points.
Mr. L.D. (AKA) Mad Man

[Rene Velez]

good flow and content, sometimes its just a flip of the coin.

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful piece of writing...Bravo.......................

[R J Askew]

BOOM, trigger pulled, love dead. RIP. Great write. Reloads. Ready. I said READ-EE!

[LadyCardiac]

I also want to throw out there that i'm really not violent nor am i always an angry person. Although i typically find myself reflecting it through my poetry. The power of venting lolz

[LadyCardiac]

To LD...thanks i think. lol. No more reloading. I'm happily married now and allowing the past to be a stepping stone in my success. Pressing forward headed towards what im claiming to be greatness.

[LadyCardiac]

Thank you

[David Dodsworth]

wowzers... great write full of emotion

[LadyCardiac]

Thanks hun!!

[Ruth]

Love the process of elimination through this love! Powerfully thought out...so many blanks are fired before we realise the degradation has become too much and a simple sentence can rectify it..
Great piece hon
xoxo