I love the striving of this. I am constantly taken with the beauty of striving. No one has this beauty so much as those in recovery. They have the clarity of vision on that subject that allows it to be all the more poignant. Lost in aspirations, who can't relate? I have spent a lifetime in that state. (I think you may want to change "I" to "I'm" in the second sentence though...The English tutor in me feels the need to say it as a help.) Writing is a great high, and one that is under control. For our minds are clearly capable of everything we feel on drugs, without drugs being needed. We can achieve those ecstasies within ourselves, and the only difference is that when WE do it, we have control.
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9 Years Ago
Yes, I'm absolutely still here...I just got back to work and got way busy again. I come here and re.. read moreYes, I'm absolutely still here...I just got back to work and got way busy again. I come here and read more than I post lately.
9 Years Ago
Well it is so good to hear from you...I have missed you...if you get a chance you should read my Rel.. read moreWell it is so good to hear from you...I have missed you...if you get a chance you should read my Relapsing, The Mini-series it is 6 Episodes of relapsing and I included everything in this series...let me know if you read them! They come straight from experience!
Me too.
"YES! I WIRTE FOR THE THINGS MONEY JUST CAN’T BUY!"
Hard to write for profit. Pleasure to write for the sharing of words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I love to create art with magical words or pragmatic words...tell a story or describe a scene...but .. read moreI love to create art with magical words or pragmatic words...tell a story or describe a scene...but this was for my first try in really exerting my feelings on paper...wrote it on Christmas day! Thanks you sweetie for reviewing...LadyAnn Happy Memorial DAy
This is a great poem and very relatable for anyone who writes. Everyone has experiences or reasons that drive them to write and you have done a beautiful job at conveying that.
Those are the things I write for too, some of them anyway, we all write for different reasons, you have expressed this directly and openly. I like the last line, that is so true.
Writing is a life force
Good luck with your exams fingers crossed
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I am a little scared about them...but if I don't give it my best shot, I will never have another. th.. read moreI am a little scared about them...but if I don't give it my best shot, I will never have another. this will be my dream come true.
I love the striving of this. I am constantly taken with the beauty of striving. No one has this beauty so much as those in recovery. They have the clarity of vision on that subject that allows it to be all the more poignant. Lost in aspirations, who can't relate? I have spent a lifetime in that state. (I think you may want to change "I" to "I'm" in the second sentence though...The English tutor in me feels the need to say it as a help.) Writing is a great high, and one that is under control. For our minds are clearly capable of everything we feel on drugs, without drugs being needed. We can achieve those ecstasies within ourselves, and the only difference is that when WE do it, we have control.
Thank you for reviewing this how are you...are you still on this site???
9 Years Ago
Yes, I'm absolutely still here...I just got back to work and got way busy again. I come here and re.. read moreYes, I'm absolutely still here...I just got back to work and got way busy again. I come here and read more than I post lately.
9 Years Ago
Well it is so good to hear from you...I have missed you...if you get a chance you should read my Rel.. read moreWell it is so good to hear from you...I have missed you...if you get a chance you should read my Relapsing, The Mini-series it is 6 Episodes of relapsing and I included everything in this series...let me know if you read them! They come straight from experience!
I am in my 50's and a student at Grand Canyon University for my Masters of Science in International Addictive Studies. I plan to do my PhD in Addiction Psychology at Intern at Boston Treatment Center. more..