Alliteration of exasperation

Painting pain in patient parlour,

Fighting fright and fantasy in fearsome focus,

Whispering wishes weathered yet wild,

Tempting truth in torments temples,

Lacking loves labour and luxury,

Burdened with the burning of back life in black,

Yielding yet yearning yesterday.

Author's Note

Basically a nonsense poem I wrote when bored but I have posted it because it seemed a little funky.

Reviews

[Syke]

What a fun read, sure it's nonsense, but that's the fun part. The overuse of alliteration makes it seem very...Seussian. The play with words and nonsensicality are by far the best parts!

[R J Askew]

It's great to play with words for the fun of it. And I like your new layouts and presentations.

[J.K. (Not Rowling)]

Oh, so fun. I love alliteration, regardless of whether it serves a higher purpose or if it's just "a little funky." I once tried to write an alphabet book with rhyming couplets of alliteration (similar to your lines), but ran out of steam at "N." I hope this was as much fun to write as it was to read.