Golden Reflection

Golden curls, bright blue eyes, Nazi’s delight,

Tall, sender, the high of fashions flavouring,

Hitler’s hinderer, the Devils delight, uncaring,

I curse the day you ruled me.

 

Never gentle eyes sparkling with sympathy,

Just thunder laughing, beating, and teasing,

Claws like a tiger, soul as black as panther's fur,

No delight like torture, paint your canvas with my pain.

 

Revenge with be sweet dear saint, O yes,

Your complaints will not deafen my woe,

Perfection wears thin like enamel, shield decomposed,

Upon reflection, something childish, deranged and plain.  

Reviews

[C. Harter Amos]

Really good poem. Some of the phrases you use like "never gentle eyes" and "perfection wears thin" are great at getting your point across. I think "Painting your canvas with my pain" maybe the strongest line of the piece. Poignant, meloncholy, strong poem. You've left a definite impression in mind of who this person is and what they're like. Kudos.

[Emily B]

that seeming white knight on the shining white charger turned out to be the devil in disguise or not. Nobody's interpretation is never the same as my intention when I write a poem. I love the loathing language.

[hyancynthstofeedthysoul]

If I read right you had a bad relationship with a Neo-Nazi. That is what your reference says to me. Irregardless whatever happened I hope it is behind you. Everyone deserves to be happy.

[Gandré]

this is the poetical charge. I like how you were weaving history and I liked "Claws like a tiger, soul as black as panther's fur, / No delight like torture, paint your canvas with my pain."
this is wonderful.... I think this is also so beautiful, for you play with words, same consonants, my tongue liked this when I was reading loud.. "Perfection wears thin like enamel, shield decomposed, / Upon reflection, something childish, deranged and plain. " wonderful work!