Yes, I do hate you because you�re beautiful!

Yes, it is true that you are beautiful,

The spiting image of Kylie Minogue,

With all the grace of a dream, God knows,

And yet you discuss me!

 

I hate you!

 

Your tone has an air; some might believe to be charming,

But your manners are dreary and also quite alarming,

You dress to impress, on every occasion,

And yet you repulse me!

 

Queen Bee! Indeed!

 

Follow your roots, Sunshine,

It’s time to dye, upon seeing the beast inside,

Would you go out on a limb and try to change?

You should be ashamed!

 

Humiliations galore!

 

Unworthy men grovel at your pink painted toes,

Flash car, need not be a Smartie, where money lies anything goes,

Yet do you even stop to wonder why these men indulge your foul-mouthed lies?

Darling, they’re too busy trying to pop the hood on Miss Double D! Surprised?

 

Think about it!

 

And while you sit there looking lost, dissertated of all common sense,

Contemplate something else, if you are capable,

If your bounty was ever lost, Lady Vain,

Do you truly believe you could act the same?

 

Status terminated…

Reviews

[C. Harter Amos]

Boy, what a rant! I think this has to rate as the strongest "hate" poem on the site! If getting your feelings out and telling this person off was what you were after, you did a grand job of it. I have to add that you've proven just how creative you are. You've been disgusted, repulsed, and the best line of them all the men are.."...too busy trying to pop the hood on Miss Double D." Got to love a good old-fashioned in your face rant. The set up is good. The eyes are drawn to your statements on the right, which is what you meant to happen, I'm sure. We go from "I hate you" to "Queen Bee, Indeed" to "Humiliations Galore" and "Think about it" to end with a grand slam..."Status Terminated". I don't know about righteous, but it's a hell of a rant. Kudos for best anger on site!

[Floating on the feather..]

The rant is really amusing. The hatred, the disgust, the derogatory feeling is so very evident from this.
Very powerful write.

Good expression.
Shinjini

[LizLadyNinja]

OMG this is wonderful. I think we have all known someone like this in our lives. This was my bestfriend from High School. I mean you captured her in everyway. And man she decided that when I, little miss plain Jane, got a boyfriend she would do everything to get us apart. Because I wasn't as pretty as she was. You have captured the essence of the Prep in every manner. The dumb blonde, who prolly really isn't blonde, the girl who becomes the trophy wife, and you have ripped her open. They are shallow women, and there is such venom in your poem. It leads me to believe that maybe this was your friend as well.

I love you you ended it, Status Terminated... what a brutal slap in the face.

Thank you dear for sharing this, as it has brought up some of my own emotions reguarding people (or a certin person) like this.

Happy Writing!

[SamSarcasm]

rage

[BrightEyes]

a great rant here...poetically done....such venom! Makes me wonder if one such vain soul has betrayed you in some way....karma may be slow, but she is a nasty one when she strikes...they get theirs in the end.

laura

[R J Askew]

This bit really amused me...

Follow your roots, Sunshine,
It's time to dye,

You generate a great head of steam in this poem. It's easy to see how she would infuriate and how readily men fall for the packaging, but do they stick around? and would any wise woman want to attract such shallow attention? And the answer to the sting in the last line is clearly no, she would lose all. But then she will almost certainly be sneaking off to the plastic surgeons for a few fixes in due course.