Silver Death

Silver Death

A Poem by Lauren Xena Campbell

Liquid ice,

Silver thread spiders web,

Black widowed death.

© 2008 Lauren Xena Campbell


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i read this with the title as the first line. this just comes together very well. short, sweet.
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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woohoo. Cool haiku. I see many black widows where I work. They are so beautiful, but I still won't kiss one. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

typical hiaku, good flow. Good description of the spider web. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello Lauren,

A great contrasts of colors - ice, silver and black. The sting/twist in the last line works well.



stork

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I really loved this one!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This and desrt should be put together. Opposites that compliment.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it...but not the subject. Spiders scare the hell out of me. Even though I am a pagan and believe in reincarnation...and talk to spiders to reduce the fear....I am scared as hell of them.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

terse and very much to the point almost a haiku in form

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Lauren Xena Campbell
Lauren Xena Campbell

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Dreams are not made to be broken, but are created in the heart to write destiny! I've always loved making up stories and putting words down onto paper, despite the fact that I only really learnt to.. more..

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