slow

slow

A Poem by Carron

Silent the halls

Light no longer occupies that opening

Enter at own risk

Edged lies temporary death

Please.. leave in peace

© 2009 Carron


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A lovely poem. A fine acrostic. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago


That was cool, especially how each line spelled out 'sleep'.
Awesome =]

- Kriss

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2009

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Carron
Carron

Cape Town, South Africa



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A Poem by Carron