Immortal ~ The Alchemy Of Forever

                             In flames of love we filled our desires

Hearts and souls brimmed with fire

Riding smoothly on winds of air

With sentient heart and love so rare

Dancing blissfully before the sun

Light of foot on dreams to run

Oh such beauty and ecstasy rare

In radiant love we danced on air

Poised before gods in pools of light

With immortal wings we took flight

 

That last day I closed your eyes

In veils of twilight sent to the skies

With outstretched arms and empty heart

I sadly watched your soul depart

In those days that we loved so

Forever immortal...

In lovely glow

 

That last day I closed your eyes

In veils of twilight sent to the sky

With outstretched arms and empty heart

I sadly watched your soul depart

In those days that we loved so…

Forever immortal...

In lovely glow

  _______

anne p murray- 11/2009

 

                                            

 

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

SEEMS YOU WROTE THIS ONE IN A SONG FORMAT WITH THE REPEATING STANZA...A LOVE STORY UNFOLDS AND YET ENDING JUST RELATIVELY AS FAST AS IT CAME IN THE LINES...AS THE REPEATING STANZA CLARIFIES THAT IN THE VERSE....