Fatal Kiss~ Of a Spider Woman

 

 

After she drank his bitter wine of pathetic love
She slyly sang him her haunted chant

"The laughs on you", she said

At times, she could act with chicane
She had her deadly charms

Oh yes~

She may have sinned
But he..
Had the stain of paltry love

Now~

Inside her gossamer labyrinth she lay
Carefully, diligently spinning her web
Revealing nothing~
And everything

She'd weave her silky snare inside his heart
Laying her egg of despair
Spinning her venom of painful truth

Her bite is deadly now~

She could have been his 'Velvet Rose'
But, he crushed her petals rare
Ending her silken dreams

Her spider's web became untethered
Attaching itself by a single thread
To his shoddy veil of selfish love

Now~

She is now the hunter
Not the hunted

In the coming eve...
She'd deliver her lethal sting
He'd be noones's lover now
Her threads would cut his miserable flesh
Her deadly venom would seal his fate

Remaining~
Nothing more
Than an ancient slithering shadow

"Betray no more", she said".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright: 2011

LadeeAnne~Anne P Murray

Kahlil Gibran: "An eye for an eye, and the whole world will be blind"

 

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Chilling this I knew a woman that was scorned and turned from a goddess to a demon who knows waht caused her to kill and then end her own life wonderfully done!

This is really awesome, love the intense emotions I enjoyed the picture as well.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well written I really liked it. I love poems that tell a story and your so good at it. I was actually working on a poem about a spider its funny and sad but I got stuck halfway through so I left it for later lol I hate to work at a poem, Most of the time it just flows so Im waiting til my web starts to spin haha

[Dream Weaver]

I do Love me some black widow tales, fatal kiss indeed!
Well done "Ladeeanne"