Life 2

It takes a day to make a dream,
But it takes many nights for a seed to become a tree.

Life is a ladder that must be climbed.
But in every stage,

There are many rivers and battles to fight
And our hopes determines our future.

Life is a trip through the wilderness
And everyone must survive for success.

But without a determination
We can never reach our destination.

There are many roads in life,
But choice

Stands between the broad and the narrow.
The world is not only what we see

But what we hear
Life is time and time is tide.

We are making an endless journey
But no ladder is without an end

Problems may fall like rain
But every seed has its season

Reviews

[Everchanging Disaster]

In stanza 5, first line-you don't need an "a" before determination.

That being said...can I change my mind again? Because I really love this! There are so many metaphors, and that's my fave!

I'd have to say my favorite metaphor was "Life is time and time is tide." beautiful!