Lonely

Lonely

A Poem by LacyBug

People are lonely because

they build walls instead of bridges.

The lonely one offers his hand,

too quickly to whomever he encounters

People drain him,even the closest of

friends and he finds loneliness to

be the best state in the union

to live in.

Inside hisself is a place where

he lives all alone.

And that's where he renews

his springs that never dry up.

© 2008 LacyBug


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I love it! There is such wisdom in your words..."they build walls instead of bridges." that is so true! Very short as well as very enlightened! Great write!

"hisself" should be "himself" is the only proofreading error I found.



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LacyBug

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