We're All Under The Same Sky

The sad patron of a kingdom now gone.
The broken ghost of an empty shell now filled.
The one in the shadow of titans now illsuperior.
The loveless lover now reimbursed.
The blind boy in the dark now a knower of what he sees.
We're all under the same sky with me.

Reviews

[Kayla]

I liked this! It is simple, yet complicated. It simple because it is short and to the point. But it is complicated because you describe the people who are also in this world!! Liked it lots!!

[Pilar Palombo]

I love how you wait until the last word of each line to get rid of each negative. Its like each line is a crescendo until that point when you're finally rid of that one bad thing. And like the other comment, you're vocabulary is really rich.

[Meredith Leigh]

It's just me =]
But I still love this poem, it's so pretty.
& the vocabulary is great! gaaaah! I just love this!!!!♥ ahaha♥ xo