Day

I wrote this in 10 minutes in my car.

Don`t let it blind you,
Let it find you.

Don`t let it throw you,
Let it show you.

Don`t let it mistake you,
Let it make you.

Don`t let it shove you,
Let it love you.

Don`t let it deceive you,
Let it receive you.

Don`t let it daze you,
Let it praise you.

Don`t let the day pass you by. 

Reviews

[kait]

this is really well written

[Emily Paige]

Wow this is kinda cute but really well writen

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

So True, amazing write, dude! Good for the pessimistic... [=

[Carolin Meisner]

amazing the poem is so good!!
deep and powerful!!

K-roo

[Kimberly Smith]

wowoowowowowo love this its like just what I needed ..
thanks you

[Donald Meikle]

tiz important not to waste a minute, but I do love a lazy afternoon sip, write more! I need to know I'm not alone

[[untitled]]

deep powerful poem with great rhyme....great write

[Song of Mercy]

Profound. I mean that. You have a wisdom that that tracends into works that are art. I see truth in this. Thanks for sharing

[Meredith Leigh]

JON! YOU WROTE A POEM!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!
See, you CAN write poetry you nut!
It's so uplifting too!!!!!! Love love love!

- Kriss

[Sammie]

that was amazing. =]