Hold on Tight� Trying to Win This Fight

Another venting poem!

 

Got to get out of this state of mind

I was bubbly on the inside

 

Can’t let this get me down

Can’t be to blame

 

I can be to blame

But don’t let me go

 

Hold on tight

Trying to win this fight

 

Maybe a vacation to clear my mind

Maybe a fire proof wall around my heart

 

Got to get my head held high

Can’t let the demon inside win this war with me

 

Let me get on a runaway train

Maybe then I’ll be safe

 

Trying to have a positive look on life

Trying not to let the demon pull me the whole way down

 

Your text remind me that your still there

So let’s be fair and tell me you care

 

Come on play with my hair

Do something to show me you care that I’m still here!

 

Don’t let this demon in me win

Help me see the brighter side of life

 

Got to believe that everything is going to be alright

Show me that I’m not alone

 

Hold on tight

Trying to win this fight

I’m not dying tonight!

 

Written: May 13, 2009

Reviews

[there is no more from m..]

Beautiful :) really beautiful :)

[Sheela]

This is good.. :)

[Kevin Andros]

Bubbly on the Inside!

I love the bubbly you!~! I Love you!~!

~KA~

[Looouise]

I loved the last 3 lines.
:]
it was another good read/write
:]

[These Haunted Hallways]

Aw :) This was SO Awesome!! Bravo hun :) Yea, u tell 'em! ;) Excellent, and kind of inspirational in a way, as the poem is speaking about trying to get thru the bad, and to never give up, and having a significant other out there to reach out to the person who is hurting in life. Great piece! :)

B.A.

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"Got to get my head held high
Can't let the demon inside win this war with me"
I liked these two lines
great poem, very deep and dark
Nice emotions conveyed
Well done Lacey Toon xD
~Kavish

[Martina]

Love it Lacey, thought it very drk and sad! LOVE IT!

[John McGrael]

i really like this.... reminds of a line from a song i wrote

"pray for me now, for i walk alone/ guided by demons through this dungeon called home"

(i have a song for everything xD, ive written so many of them)