Silent Cries of the Heart

OKAY little note: i have already cut myself 7 times... dont freak. I'm doing better I just needed this to kinda vent and get it off my chest! Read and Review PLEASE!!!

 

Never knowing what could have been

You cut the strings on my heart

 

You are only 22 and I think I might fall in love with you

But you said that I need someone to be there for me

 

I’ll never let you go from my memory

Set you in that special place in my broken heart

 

Cut myself 7 times

Maybe that can become an awesome rhyme

 

Things go out of hand

Moment of weakness or the crying out of a heart

 

Haven’t cried

But give it time

 

I guess I didn’t let you in

So that took some of the pain away

 

Lie to me

But I hate being lied too

 

So just give it another day

And watch myself die away

 

Got to be careful

Maybe next time it might not be skin deep

 

Tiny little razor so shiny and fast

Just a little slit of the skin

 

Weight of my life has gone away

But things don’t seem to go any better

 

Disappointment on every ones face

But that only a little price to pay

 

Thinking about just locking up my heart

I was trying to love you but it didn’t play out that way

 

Wanted to be without

To kind of prove a point

 

But hey that don’t matter anyways

Just friend but that will have to be the day

 

Thinking about a making a few more little scars

But that is just a price

 

I can get over this

I hope…

 

Please hear my cry out

But I guess this is just a silent cry.  

 

Written: May 13, 2009

Author's Note

Stay Beautiful and pleas ignore grammer problems

Reviews

[54321]

beautiful in a melancholly way...

[Looouise]

I thought it was good.
But I think that you shouldn't mention anything about yourself cutting in the author's notes.
When you mention it in the poem, that is enough.
[just my thought i suppose]
overall,
it was a pretty good write and read
:]

[These Haunted Hallways]

Woh! Such a beautifully-tragic poem. I could feel this in every aspect here, and it must be so painful what ur goin thru :( I feel ya. Dont hurt urself, love. Stay strong, and keep ur chin up :)

B.A.

[.]

Dark write
The way you described the cuts are so deep that we feel it
It should have been really hurtful
And stop hurting yourself for a damn guy who broke you
Well done
~Kavish

[Martina]

I like it!!! This is sad and dark, I really love it actually! Great work lacey

[John McGrael]

i have heard your silent cry....

(i like it!!)