Victor

 

One

The sound of thunder and rain making music beyond the window, my eyes are closed as the sound of rain pitter against the window. As I lay there my eyes open, slowly taking in the little light from the window. Eternal damnation is horrible, lonely and something no one should go through alone. This day seems so long as I wait for the night to fall, her sent still haunts me as I sleep. Angelica my mind calls out to a long lost love, she left me so young and so many years ago but she is still fresh in my mind.

The light shine on my bare chest as I lay there looking blankly at the window. The light in the bathroom turned off as my one night stand enters from the bathroom, wrapped in a towel. She has lovely red hair, just like Angelica had. The thrust for blood runs in my veins as she looks and me and gives a devilish smile. I give a devilish smile back, then slowly getting out of bed showing my bare naked self, she runs her eyes over my body.

 I walk slowing over to her as she drops the towel. My eyes gliding over her naked and wet body, I grab her and she giggles. I lean in and kiss her deeply; she puts her hands behind my neck as we stand there. I push her against the wall and she gives a little moan as I kiss down her neck. She gasps as I bite her, not with my fangs but with my human teeth. I move down to the top of her chest and then above the left breast, my fangs grow out and I sink them in right on her heart.

She tries to scream but I put my hand on her mouth, she fights but she is weak to me. I almost drain the life out of her, she falls limp in my arms as I pull out and look at her. She is still trying to fight me, I garb her neck and pull it fast, Crack the sound of her neck sounds through the dinky hotel room. Thunder claps over head; I look up knowing that god is angry with what I have done. I look down as I drop her to the ground, blood hangs from my lips as I look at her naked body, water drips off her hand that is out reached to her cell phone.

I kick the cell phone under the bed and walk slowly back to the bed and crawl in, pulling the sheet over my dick, my left leg is out stretched as I raise my right one up. I reach for the pack of cigarettes the hooker had, popping one out and taking the lighter out of the front of the pack. I put the cigarette between my lips and light up, pulling a low drawl from the butt, holding it in for a few second and then blowing it out through my mouth. I take a few more puffs off the butt and put it out in the table beside the bed. Turning the TV on the news, I get up and grabbed my cloths, pulling them on quickly, I look at the poor girl, and her eyes are looking at the floor at her cell phone.

A shiny ring on her engagement hand shine in the light from the window. I get up and take the ring from her hand and close her eyes. I walk back over to the table, grabbed the lighter, the sheet from the bed and walked back over to the poor girl. I laid the white cloth on her body and face. Taking the end closer to her face, I start the lighter and hold it to the cloth. The cloth catches the flame; I throw the light still lit on her body and walk to the window.

I open the window and jump down into the night rain. Again God claps thunder and I walk to the street and see that I was the only one. I look up at the hotel window and see smoke rising from the burning body. I drop my head down and walk down the street and someone cries, fire engine sirens whale, and people are shouting. I don’t look back as I walk, a few years from everything I teleport to London.

New York City far from my mind, I see a small unknown grave yard. I place the shiny ring that I had in my pocket on the nail that hangs from the wooden cross. Angelica forever love crosses my mind. She was mine before the damnation took me; she was the only one I loved. But the Black Death took my love away from me.

I sat down in front of her grave and looked down at the dry earth, the sun shining high in sky. Hitting my skin making me sparkly, like diamonds on that pretty engagement ring, that rest on the cross.

Author's Note

My 1st time wrtting something like this. Hope you enjoy, Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[John McGrael]

im not a very big vampire fan...

this is a wonderful story but not really my style xD

but it is really good!!!, i like the imagery and stuff

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If it's your first time, then it's rather a nice attempt leading to success
There are a lot of descriptions in this write and the story kept flowing
Nice write
~Kavish~

[Looouise]

I thought this was great. Especially because it relied so much on description.
It was brilliant.
The plot kept going, and it didn't falter at any point.

Maybe just a few grammatical errors and spelling errors.

Overall, though, it was a pretty good read
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