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A Poem by Labu

After all the times we spent together
The day has come for us to go our separate ways
I sense weakness inside me every time I try to remember this
Your warmth turn into fire that burn me
If you recall we were very alike,right?
Whether it was our untruthful words
Or our retreating figures that pretended to be brave
I'm sure the circumstances are the same for the both of us
After all we had our mutual emotions too
The dreams that I wanted to grasp
Always being buried by my own answers to my questions
within the interval of wishes
I wonder if right now,will I be reflected in your happy eyes?
I'm not strong enough to tell you about my feeling of insecurity
I bore my wounds within the fragments of regret
But I will keep moving forward toward the skies we have traveled
Because they have freedom which is similar to solitude
Maybe right now holding not your hands but holding on to my hopes 
 

© 2011 Labu


Author's Note

Labu
My brain freeze when I try to give a title to this so I'll let you decide :P

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Buried By My Own Answers..............holding on to hope even when we are afraid. Wanting to see your own reflection in the eyes that you love.......such yearning in this confessional piece. Well done Labu

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Puchong, Selangor, Malaysia



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