Star Light

Did you know during the endless night

All I could think about is how much longer you will be here by my side

Please don't go anywhere

Even though I think so hard about it I cant make you stay

I found a shooting star

I guess I shall wish upon it

I wish that it could deliver the words I could not say

Can you hear the sound of my voice

Coming from the depth of my heart,is it reaching you

Because of you I now realized the feelings I have here

I want to be close to you with our fingers intertwine

Shine upon my unsteady steps

Star light

The sun crosses over clear blue sky

So dazzling,making me overlook star light

Even though I cannot  express how much I love you

The feelings I have realized because of this moment, I will never forget it

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

much longing here............well expressed

[Liz Gillitzer]

This is great! Reading this, I feel like you stole my "brain-goo," as my best friend likes to call it. I wish on stars almost every night. Someday, I swear, our wishes will come true!

[Sarah Hobbit]

Beautiful. I like this.
Well done
Sarah :-)