Our love...

Don't you know my love,

how much i love you,

because you are my first love,

and I hope it will be for eternally

But now you have change,

you're just not the same,

why oh why my love,

why it has to be like this

My heart had been hollow,

since the day you betrayed my love,

now I'm drifting more and more into a hole of emptiness,

you make me feel like I don't deserve to be loved

Why you have to ruined the love that we build,

if it's true that you don't love me anymore,

all I want is you to be honest with me,

I hope that you feel what I feel,

so that you know what its like to be in my position...

Now I ask for forgiveness,

for my heart has been closed for you,

I hope that you will be happy,

with whoever you will be

Release me...

Free me....

Just go away...

And never come back...

Author's Note

Sorry for the mediacore english :P

Reviews

[Scisenheart]

it's really good, though i think you might want to broaden your vocabulary(though im guessing english is not your first launguage, considering that i am really impressed) try alternating love with words like dear and my sweet ect.
Scisenheartxx :D