Dream

Dream

A Poem by Soul's whispers
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A poem about long cherished love

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I dreamt about you last night,
We walked together, under the moonlight.

You held my hand, not letting me go away,
While the warmth of your touch swept my heart away

I told you that I think about you all the time
Whether morning, whether evening you never leave my mind.

You told me that you feel the same,
And that you cherish the thought of me having your name.

My heart leapt up with joy,
But then i remembered, oh boy,

That’s just a dream, not reality,
A reality that'll never occur, never with your sanity.

But let the mind show Its show and continue on,
'Cause that's a precious dream that I never want to wake up from.

© 2025 Soul's whispers


Author's Note

Soul's whispers
Don’t mind about the grammatical mistakes please. English isn’t my first language that's why I am not that good at it. Let me know what you think about it. And thanks for giving me your time.

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Ah, a valuable dream that you can never forget and still want to chase it and you are. Sometimes a dream can keep you happy and you follow it to BE happy. This was beautiful. I love it, it's fine even if English isn't your first language.

Keep writing, this is awesome!

-Martiya

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ah, a valuable dream that you can never forget and still want to chase it and you are. Sometimes a dream can keep you happy and you follow it to BE happy. This was beautiful. I love it, it's fine even if English isn't your first language.

Keep writing, this is awesome!

-Martiya

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreams are so inciteful. And telling.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For english not being your first language it's quite good

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soul's whispers

1 Month Ago

Thank you. It really encouraged me.

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Added on March 10, 2025
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