Bedtime

not the best... something i quickly jotted down. any feedback really appreciated:)

As I lay here in bed

Thoughts emptied from my head 

I escaped from reality

And let my dreams take me away instead

Some dreams scared me, others were alright

But regardless they all made me feel so alive 

I was simply living in my head 

Until the time came when I opened my lids, 

and had to wait  for this to all start once again...

Reviews

[Gurleen Saluja]

A good and simple write ma'am.. :)

[laalaxox]

Thank you!

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome

[Fenix Flight]

AAh blissful sleep. How I miss it. haha. I enjoy this poem. I love the lightness and almost child like wonder in it. Very well written

[laalaxox]

Awww thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

My lids. A interesting statement. I like the poem. No perfect style. The ancient and great writers had their own special mark upon writing. Writing is learning and improving. Good to dream and hold hope for better days and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Wandering Minstrel]

It's not bad, reads a bit choppy though.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wonderful poem really sometimes even I feel better to be in dream always into a place where I just wanted to stay till forever. Nice poem friend!