In Love

the feels of love.

I know this is a bit delayed and so ever cliche but I love you so that makes it ok. 

The way he looks at me can sometimes be a sin, that just proves how crazy I am for him 

When he holds me in his arms so tight

I just want him to know that I've never been so alright

There's no where to hide when I'm with him 

No secrets, no lies, no sneaky suprises

He knows all my scars and terrible things

But still continues to be my missing puzzle piece

When I'm around him I just want to escape 

Because every tiny thing just seems to fade away

When we laugh togeter

It makes me believe that we are perfect enough to end up till forever

Just the sight of him

Can make my own heart ring nor sometimes sting

He listens to me and nothing less

Even at times when I tend to obsess 

Day after day I continue to be amazed

Why this idiot even bothers to stay 

Although I am not complaining 

I just hope he knows how greatful I am

For he is my home

I want to run far away

With nothing but him and just live and stay

I don't know what love even is

But I am certain enough to know that I have fallen for him. 

Reviews

[Anastasia Stale]

You portrayed an extreme form of love in this poem. "The way he looks at me can sometimes be a sin, that just proves how crazy I am for him " I liked this line. The feeling of seeing that someone is just amazing and mysterious. You heart must have fluttered a lot. Otherwise, this was great.

[laalaxox]

Thankyou so much for your feedback! Means a lot!!:) xx

[vaishnavi]

really and totally agree :)

[Thea]

Aw! This was really beautiful. It makes me feel in love (though I haven't even found Mr. RIght, LOL). I love reading positive love poems (because reading too much heartbreaking poems is quite stressing, hahaha)! This touched my heart so much. I wonder how it really feels like to fall deeply into someone. It must be enthralling. Wonderfully-penned! Keep writing! ^^

[laalaxox]

Awwww thank you so much for your kind words!! I'll be sure to check out your writing as well! And Ahh yes the feels of love are quite strange! Makes you feel both insane but all at the same time out of this world, Hahaha. And yes I agree I enjoy all the positive love poems as well much more enjoyable! :) xx

[Thea]

And I just have to put this in my library! I will probably read it again when I've finally found 'him'. Hahaha! Love must be so kahnbcjdsbcsd. I can't even explain it. It must be so mysterious. LOL. Anyway, you're welcome. :)

[laalaxox]

Awwwww your'e too kind!! I am sure you will find 'him' soon enough :)! Hahaha made my night :)!

[Thea]

Have you found 'him'? Hahaha!

[laalaxox]

Hmmmm I don't even know! Its hard to know Hahaha!

[Thea]

Well, I hope you'll find out soon! ^^

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Write from deep inside:))))))))))))))))))

[laalaxox]

Youre to kind! Thank you :))

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Well just giving credit where credit is due:)