In Love

the feels of love.

I know this is a bit delayed and so ever cliche but I love you so that makes it ok. 

The way he looks at me can sometimes be a sin, that just proves how crazy I am for him 

When he holds me in his arms so tight

I just want him to know that I've never been so alright

There's no where to hide when I'm with him 

No secrets, no lies, no sneaky suprises

He knows all my scars and terrible things

But still continues to be my missing puzzle piece

When I'm around him I just want to escape 

Because every tiny thing just seems to fade away

When we laugh togeter

It makes me believe that we are perfect enough to end up till forever

Just the sight of him

Can make my own heart ring nor sometimes sting

He listens to me and nothing less

Even at times when I tend to obsess 

Day after day I continue to be amazed

Why this idiot even bothers to stay 

Although I am not complaining 

I just hope he knows how greatful I am

For he is my home

I want to run far away

With nothing but him and just live and stay

I don't know what love even is

But I am certain enough to know that I have fallen for him. 

Reviews

[Anastasia Stale]

You portrayed an extreme form of love in this poem. "The way he looks at me can sometimes be a sin, that just proves how crazy I am for him " I liked this line. The feeling of seeing that someone is just amazing and mysterious. You heart must have fluttered a lot. Otherwise, this was great.

[laalaxox]

Thankyou so much for your feedback! Means a lot!!:) xx

[vaishnavi]

really and totally agree :)

[RAOrourke]

Beautiful sentiment of your love and what it means to love someone with all your heart! Well done. The only thing I would change is to make the two first lines shorter making them flow like the rest..you could just make the first two lines into four, you don't have to get rid of any of the words because they are perfect!!! :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

I guess that cupid had struck you with his arrow.. :) ha.... well this is a sweet li'l poem portraying teenagers innocent love.. it had a lyrical quality to it that acts as an added charm. Good write.

~Sophy

[Swaroop Manikandan]

wish you to rise in love as well :-)

[Matching Socks]

awww....
my heart is gushing. : )

nice pic too.

[Ally Monique]

This is such a cute devotion to the one you love! If you wrote this for someone, I hope he saw it :) great write! Thank you for sharing!

[laalaxox]

awww thank you and yes i have showed him:)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice poem good to have someone who loves you so much....the rhythm throughout the poem makes it more beautiful.

[laalaxox]

thank you for your kind words and feedback!! always deeply appreciated !!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[Rene Salinas]

Young love or so it seems that quasi magical moment where we seem to be handed an opportunity may we act upon it is compltetely up to us. You however share the way it fills you and takes you and completes you. With surprise and enthusiasm with hope and reverence even to the desire of perfection you did associate and transcendence you wish. It makes me want to tresure the moment although I know is not mine.
Thankyou

[laalaxox]

Awwwwww thank you for your beautiful words!!!!! ♥ I am so happy you felt the connection with the words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"For he is my home
I want to run far away
With nothing but him and just live and stay"
Hard to define love. Your above words did. When we need the one person and feel safe and loved. This is love. Nice flow of thoughts led to the good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[laalaxox]

Once again thank you for your feedback it is much appreciated!! It is hard to define such a broad and mysterious concept like love, but I think everyone has their own unique spin to the word:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Love is what we need and hold on to. You are welcome.