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YOUR EYES!

 

I look into your eyes

Those deep pools of light blue,

And i see everything that is good;

I see everything that is you,

Everything thst is us.

 

I look into your eyes,

And slowly i begin to drown.

My world is spinning

I cant tell my ups or downs.

 

As i gaze into your eyes,

And i wonder how you see reality,

How those beautiful eyes view life.

As i sit there, locked in your gaze

Wishing i could break free

But i just cant seem to leave those beautiful pools.

 

I continue to fall, despite my lack of air,

Knowing i slowly continue to drown,

A little deeper, each moment i stay there.

I wonder how you see things,

What it would be like to be you....

 

I wonder whats it like to see the world through your eyes,

How you see yourself,

But most importantly how you see me.

 

Because when i look into my eyes

I see nothing but brown puddles,

Full of shame and hurt and unforgiveness,

Lined with low self esteem and hatred; only myself to blame.

 

I look into your eyes

And see everything you would never be...

Slowly i come up for air,

As i realize that, too, is what you see.

 

When i look in your eyes,

The world seems golden and bright.

Enraged in blue i remember my lifeless eyes,

And suddenly i am full of spite.

If i had my eyes like yours

I wouldn't share them with someone like me;

I would keep them hidden.

 

But i guess that's the difference between you and me.

 

I wish i had those eyes,

Those deep pools of light blue,

Because what i see in you,

Is everything i wish i could be...

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

I loved this one!!! It was beautiful but sad. Very nicely written. I really really enjoyed it!