WHO AM I

About this poem, some times in our life will should ask ourself who we are.

Oh! Creator of me
who am i
Who is the real me
I wonder why
I want to know me

I wish i knew
Maybe am someone else.
This is new
What am i going to do.

To discover the real me
Which i can not see
Why love and family
Why the enemies.

Why am i here
What made me special
I don't see things clear
I need to know better.

The truth i seek
Why am i called to this world
Then i do think
My purpose in this beautiful world.

This path they call life
will do the best i can
to make it a better place
With each trial i have to face.

Author's Note

It has been long, but am back not fully due to my exam

Reviews

[Moonie]

I reallh liked the message and the structure. However, I have a few suggestions.
#1 I didn't understand what you meant by "Maybe am someone else or you " , is "you" here the creator.
#2 Try "why the enemies?"
#3 try "I don't see things clearly"

[Kuandio]

I've been asking myself this question a lot recently. Seems I used to think I knew the answer

I liked the lines, "Why love and family, Why the enemy."

It is a difficult question, and I like how honestly you face it, and even more that you provide a sense of optimism or faith at the end

[Tiana]

Such a beautiful poem ... Moving and inspiring! Wonderfully written ...

[cinel]

Thankz alot for reading, and also for liking it.

[Sami Khalil]

A well articulated and touching write. Excellent...:)....

[cinel]

Thankz much for reading and i hope u enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....