CAN YOU HANDLE THE RIDE

CAN YOU HANDLE THE RIDE

A Poem by JAYJAY
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I HAVE THIS WALL THAT IS 15 FEET TALL, AND THIS WALL IS ALSO 3 INCHES WIDE, DEEP DOWN INSIDE.... I HAVEN'T KNOWN OF ANY GUY, WHO HAS TRIED TO STAY AND GO FOR THE RIDE... INSIDE IS WHERE MY HEARTBEAT SHAKES, AND MY SOUL LAYS SO QUITELY WIDE AWAKE...

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© 2008 JAYJAY


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JAYJAY
WORD ARE FROM MY GENERATION OF LAUNGUE......

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It looks good. Although, I think you should take it out of the description box and into the larger one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like what I read so far.....

Posted 16 Years Ago


ohh i guess im suppose to read from the box you have at the top... you might want to repost this i think it cut you off..... but i liked what you had in the little box.... maybe try to put it in the big one..???

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2008

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JAYJAY
JAYJAY

ONTARIO, CA



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