His name was Diamond

His name was Diamond

A Poem by Lola Nation

What’s-his-name?

 

He’d make me paper tulips

every night at the Billiard Inn,

Giving them to all the pretty girls

who paid no attention to him.

 

I have long forgotten his name,

Although, I swear,

it remains on the tip of my tongue,

 

I do remember

he was from Wisconsin

he didn’t fit in

and we’d make fun of his

canary yellow duly pick-up truck

The way he clung onto us

because we were too cool

to touch, too loose to catch

 

We were all too important,

keeping the barstools warm

pool cues chalked,

smacking the balls into corner pockets,

until someone scratched,

 

Sipping beers, vying for the bartender’s

attention, slipping into the unoccupied

booths to do a line,

 

I have tried for three days to remember

his name now and the ones who would remember

 

have probably long forgotten mine.

 

© 2009 Lola Nation


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I love the imagery in this piece, you can picture the character standing there noticing everything around him.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

they've got diamonds on the souls of their shoes....

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Lola Nation
Lola Nation

Los Angeles, CA



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