Status Updates

Status Updates

A Poem by Lola Nation
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in reference to those clever "I can't believe it's Monday again..." or "TGIF" status remarks on any given networking site...

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Why does everyone’s status seem

to revolve around disbelief of Monday

and religious exaltations for Friday?

Occasionally, someone is wishing it was Sunday

but you never hear about good

old Tuesday, it’s lost in the shuffle

Wednesday is referred to as a mere hump

to get over, and Thursday’s child

still has far to go,

no one appreciates the in between

or seems to realize

365 days a year, until we die

we waited for two days a week

cursed one, and praised the prelude

to a weekend, completely

neglecting three valuable days of our lives.

Do the math, update your status

enjoy today.

© 2009 Lola Nation


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Nice. Express frustration *and* make a valid point in a poem. This strikes me prose poetry, written well. The line breaks are inconsequential as the poem seems to flow in one vein. Also, I agree every bit with the message.

Glad to see you are still alive and writing here, it's been a while. OG Reviewers dead now I guess? Hrm...



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Nice. Express frustration *and* make a valid point in a poem. This strikes me prose poetry, written well. The line breaks are inconsequential as the poem seems to flow in one vein. Also, I agree every bit with the message.

Glad to see you are still alive and writing here, it's been a while. OG Reviewers dead now I guess? Hrm...



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my favorite has always been "someday", but I make do with today, and never give it a name...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lola Nation
Lola Nation

Los Angeles, CA



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