Evol 🔥 love

Evol 🔥 love

A Story by 4LOKO
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Can we love 🥀

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I got a place 2 spend my quiet nights time to unwind from the pressure in this life of mine I cry at times😥I almost contimplated suicide but when I held that knife all I could see were my children's eyes 🙏 no one's knows my struggle they only see the trouble it's hard to carry on in this world when no one loves you 🙏picture me inside the misery of broken dreams these struggles I survived praying hard for better days promises to hold on 🙏everyday a struggle left with no choice but to roll on will I survive all the fights in the darkness trouble sparked it !! They tell me home iz where the heart is that's where it started ☠️dad departed left my mum's with a broken mind and a bottle to get it started 🙏is there a way 2 change or am I just a victim of things I did to maintain 🙏I never really had much I use run with a bad bunch I was a little kid sneaking weed in my bag lunch and over to college we was getting by juvenile crime robbed my homies of there young lives 🙏☠️and even know I had the pain in my heart I was hopeless from the start they couldn't tell me Nuthin marijuana had my mind gone it wasn't healthy the rain and the court cases had me for a whole year I felt the pain but I'm still here FUK the OPPz ☠️let the whole world know it they will break everything you ever worked for �'"now I gets no peace becuz they hunting me now why I had to say this s**t 🖕they can relate 2 the pain that they caused now these are the worst days sometime it hurts 2 pray I wonda why God turned his bakk on me I know that ain't the truth sometimes I need proof �'�Remember how it Waz!! the brothaz we kreepin' out in the projects Tryna find a way make it out this mess🙏small time drinkin' wit da ol' Headz I'm just Another knucklehead brotha from the gutta Tryna deal with this madness raised by a single mother!!!�'�3081 till my fukin' death Im Tryna tell you when it's on keep ya head to the sky smile and most of all hold on #shoutoutz 2 tha souls Tryna make it thru the struggle R.I.P to tha 1'z we lost#🙏

© 2018 4LOKO


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This is very telling, deep, raw, emotional, honest and REAL!
Iv read this one before but I love it.
I love the parts where you did rhyme there was a few.
Fantastic right :)

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