![]() Fossil MotherA Story by LKNLKN![]() This is just a beginning of something I was working on a few months ago. It's the opening except from a novel. I'm about to start again and it just sounds wrong...clunky, poorly written.![]() Mai
Ming tightly grasped the few scraps of cabbage that pressed against her
chest. Hearing the faint cries of her
pursuers, Ming began to quicken her pace.
She ducked below the tangled undergrowth where a loose vine lay. Her foot twisted, and the vine sent Ming
tumbling down into the emptied expanse of the verdant forest. Slightly dazed, Ming peered up along the
wooden protectors that adorned her side.
The woods appeared to call out to her.
The soft sounds of ancient specters swirled along with the baleful
gale. Their sounds enraptured Ming,
instantly coaxing her in delirium. The
voices continued to speak, gushing along the vast stretch of leaves, rapidly
increasing in pitch. Their words became
muddled, frantically lost in the downward descent. What are they
saying? “They approach.” It spoke! The voice spoke in a resonance undeniably hallow,
rumbling its message in muddled obscurity.
Great lumbering giants, they simply sought peace, refuge from the
hazarded machinations of mankind. Timbered
reverberations awoke Ming from her daze as she rose to her feet; hastily complying
with their solemn request. She couldn’t
afford to lose any more time. Ming began
sprinting towards the faint recesses of light that dotted along the edge of the
forest. The path opened up, eager to
spit out its disheveled intruder. Each glance became increasingly desperate. How far away could her trackers be? Would they continue to pursue her, all for a
few measly portions of cabbage? Ming
silently cursed to herself. I should have
paid more attention. It wasn’t safe to
assume that the garden would be abandoned. Ming hadn’t planned on living life as a thief. But her rulers hadn’t provided a sufficient
alternative. It had all
started with Mao’s victory over the Kuomintang in 1949; the Chinese Communist
Party, or, CCP, established a new policy, known amongst elites as the leap
forward. Starting immediately, the
government would seize control over the entire agricultural sector. Individual farmers would share communal tools
and produce for the country’s exports.
For fair exchange, the farmer’s payment consisted of food, shelter, and
care from the government. In allowing
the government to monopolize crops, they could increase profits, which in turn
allowed for further industrial development.
Supporters hailed the plan as an ideal solution to a growing necessity. Critics either stayed silent, or were silenced. Within the first few years collections were already
drastically misreported. The abundant
harvest promised to the people never came.
The leaders remained steadfast.
It would take more than a few reports of famine to deter their
cause. To admit failure, only ten years
in power could prove disastrous. Success became paramount. And could never be realized. Not even a year later Ming’s beloved China plunged
into turmoil. The sporadic flames of
famine had combusted into a raging wildfire.
Only the bodies of her fellow countrymen could quell the beast’s
appetence. Chaos had overthrown the
government, instilling a brutal primeval code.
A merciless code, created from pure instinct. A code that burned deep within the hearts of
every man. Survival. In an exercise of futility the people took to
arms, and attempted to combat their militias; only to end up as additional
statistics. Sensing a losing battle, the
CCP revoked their naive policies and regrouped, content to watch the country
purge. They were merely children. Old sand castles could easily be washed away
and rebuilt anew. Within the Heilongjiang Province, weeks had gone by
since local officials deserted the poorly built shacks that peppered the Songhua
River. When the promise of relief diminished,
the citizens of Hegang quickly came to understand that their government had
abandoned them. They weren’t alone. China’s countryside’s became littered with
bodies, millions. For over a year now,
Mai Ming witnessed the atrocities.
Throughout the months her neighbors slowly dissipated from famine and
disease, no amount of sustenance could be obtained from their undying
loyalty.
© 2012 LKNLKNAuthor's Note
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Added on August 10, 2012 Last Updated on August 10, 2012 Tags: Chapter, Historical Fiction, China, Adventure |