Last Chance

A Story by LJ

flash fiction month, day four, 2024 - CHALLENGE

Must come home today <stop> Wire fare <stop> Meet NYC airport <stop> Please? <end>

Question sent back telegram office <stop> Who this? <end>

Your daughter <stop> Now in Oakland CA <stop> Help <end>

No phone? <stop> This expensive <stop> Which daughter? <end>

Josie <stop> Favorite <stop> Lost everything <stop> Help <stop> Must leave NOW <end>

Have 3 daughters Molly Marianne Theresa <stop> See your name? <stop> Who this? <end>

Daddy Joe <stop> No joking <stop> Am desperate <end>

Joe at 1321? <stop> You his smartass kid? <stop> Ha ha <stop> Will call Joe <end>

This Charlene? OMG <stop> Yikes <end>

© 2024 LJ

Author's Note

FFM Day 4, 2024
Challenge! - Element one: Epistolary story, Element two: unreliable narrator
Wordcount 100 ////
(Wrote a drabble because ???! goofy)

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Added on July 4, 2024
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Tags: FFM 2024, Day 4, Challenge, wordcount 100

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LJ

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i am testing this to see what it's all about now. i used to write here years ago, and enjoyed it very much. i wrote fiction mostly, and many reviews for other writers. i made friends, and hope to agai.. more..

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