Supersonic Monster

I, I've fallen in love

I couldn't get enough

They, took you away

Now, I am betrayed.

We said our goodbyes

I missed you last night

Please, come back to me

I'm not what I could be

Please, leave me alone

I never meant to hurt anyone

Don't let it escape

Supersonic monster inside of me.

You never loved me

Our dreams fell apart

The house was tore down

The babies cries all drowned

So if it's just tonight

The animal inside

Let it live and die

Against the end of times

Like everything inside

This is our last chance

Our hearts have not yet died

My heart is breaking

And then It's racing

I used to be fading

I loved you at the speed of light

I'm never gonna die

At least not tonight...

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I found this somewhat confusing. The lack of punctuation makes this a little hard to follow. Not sure where to stop and start.
A sad tale,asks her to come back and immediately says leave me alone.
A conflict.
Think this has good potential.

[Chris Micha]

I love the concept of the supersonic monster inside. I honestly could see this as a song and I would love to see it's evolution!!

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

Oh, well thank you! I actually have a youtube channel and I might consider making this a song!! I'll be the next big hit!!

[Chris Micha]

There you go!!!

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

heh, check out some more of my stuff, they're all like that.

[Chris Micha]

Will do :)

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

:) U too Christian