Still There

"You approached me

You made me laugh,

We were young

We fell in love,

The blush

The smiles,

The rush

The heartbeats,

I guess we both fell hard

I’m sorry,

 I was wrong

I did a mistake

Now its over

I can’t look at you

I can’t face you

But I need you

Years later,

We’re next to each other,

You look at me

And there it comes again,

My heart skips a beat

You smile

You feel it

Its still there."

 

Reviews

[Eleanor]

That's pretty interesting!
You just showed correctly how love never ends. It remains deep inside. Still alive :)
How much we all long to see them smile or just to see a glance of them. But things happen and everything changes. It gets weaker until it ends. But just a single spark can light it up again.
Nice job!

[Arsh]

Sounds good! You're seemed a very romantic poetic soul. You write with your heart and always convert the feelings into words. Excellent job! Keep it up! ;)

[Saddam]

Always dear..... A impressive touch and a feel is there. A very nice piece of art dear friend.

[maria ( rose)]

running with emotions memories and love. Love this Poem !!
maria rose

[maria ( rose)]

I ''picked your poem'' for today it will be seen in the forum:)

[LHD]

Thank you so much! :)

[maria ( rose)]

you're welcome!! have a great day

[Alex Boyd]

I must say it's dead on. Human emotions is uncontrollable and how one feel is how one feel. A crush, a lover, an admire anything and everything. Emotions are beautiful and long lasting even the ones that brings us pain for it is tribulation that makes us. I did enjoy

[JD Jessop]

That is pretty cool. Swirl of emotions from long ago that resurface and are still alive today. Good poem. Thanks for sharing.

[LHD]

Thank you :)