Dear Stranger

I love you,
But you don't know I exist
I never said hi,
You never smiled
I cant wait to see you,
You give a sense of excitement to my body
A certain rush,
You inspire me
Yet you have no idea
Should I approach you?
Or should I leave you?
For now,
I look forward to see you again.

-LHD

Author's Note

I would appreciate your comments.

Reviews

[Crapim]

A great deal comes from a great expectaion. Very inspiring. Keep up the good work.

[Arsh]

It's a very deep write written by the strong feelings of heart. When the heart wants to see someone again, Mind always starts playing with us. Ummm... May be, you've got trapped into the zone of infatuation. Not sure but yea.. sometimes, we all loose the rein ov`r our hearts. Very nice and beautiful write. Your feelings are reflecting through the write. Keep it up!

[Alex Boyd]

Secret admire but not lovers for lust is less potent only for that moment yelp only for that moment. I like the context of your poem it's very heartfelt and warming. If give you a sense of hope that one day the admire will be noticed. Keep up the good work

[LHD]

Thank you!