Jerk

I wrote this for a jerk ^.^

You waste of time, you waste of rhyme. 

Deep down inside, your filled with slime. 

I knew I should have given up from the start. 

But silly me listened to my heart. 

Logic told me you were a shoddy choice,

But I listened to the one with the stronger voice. 

Now I lay down my affection in desolate shatter.

Your discretion is missing. Did it ever matter?

You knew from the beginning what you wanted to achieve. 

Now you vanish from sight and im left here to grieve. 

Because I had ever so lightly declined,

You decided to pack up and leave me for blind. 

Now I see the true meaning of one night stand.

You fling yourself freely like a rubber-band. 

But hunny one day your elastic will break, 

And no one will want you, they'll refuse to take.

Your head grew big with the idea of fame,

When in reality no one even knows your name.

You tossed aside the ones who, for you, were good,

All so you could satisfy that tiny wood. 

Your eyes will awaken and you'll realize whats missing. 

All cause you wasted your entire time kissing. 

So enjoy the fling till the final point.

You will realize all the people that you disappoint. 

Reviews

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow i love this!!! great job! mind checkin out some of my stuff? thanks

[I Shred This Cabbage]

All so you could satisfy that tiny wood.

brilliantly funny line!

enjoyed the read, like the feeling it creates; like resentment will only show in rhyme.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This one stings....pretty brutal.
One for Smack DVD.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Your writings are so lovely. Great write.
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Your eyes will awaken and you'll realize whats missing......

I like your these words.
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