Silly Girl

Silly Girl

A Poem by LeDiisco
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I think every girl can relate to this poem somehow or another.

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Silly girl Silly girl. 

Who are you trying to fool.

You're stuck inside of your own little dream 

And fall for the boy who's a tool.


Silly girl Silly girl.

You believe all these boys way too fast. 

They gain your trust little by little

But then they leave you there for last.


Silly girl Silly girl.

You day dream way too much.

They love to play with you pretty head

And your left thinking of their last touch.


Silly girl Silly girl.

You need to just move on.

It was just a one night stand 

And now you are playing as his pawn.


Silly girl Silly girl.

You deserve way much more.

You know the moment he gets the chance 

He will disappear through that door.


Silly girl Silly girl.

Just let go of your fears.

This little boy is worth nothing you shed.

Not even those few small tears.

© 2012 LeDiisco


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This is one of the sad unforgiving trials of life. There is wisdom coming from the experience in this poem. It is wisdom, a warning and the vision of a soothsayer all wrapped up in one package. You explained that it was for everyone and true that is.. for many of us guys have felt like the Silly Boy as well. You have a special talent for trimming off the fat and leaving only the quintessential words of your themes. Every line packs a knockout punch. You never seem to have to set it up. It's very difficult with such candid speech, but the risk is worth the reward of genuine emotion. Kudos for making it look easy. In the hands of most writers...this teknik would turn out to be a disaster.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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After reading this, I thought you might like to see / hear this, not because of the music but because of the words.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iaysTVcounI

Regards Skin

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think that one day you will find the kind of grown up man who makes you feel wise, not silly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


aww :/ i read silly girl, and thought this was gonna be a fun story about a silly girl.
i juged the poem by its name.
well atleast it seems like you have learned that some people are liars.
ps. i read prawn xD

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is one of the sad unforgiving trials of life. There is wisdom coming from the experience in this poem. It is wisdom, a warning and the vision of a soothsayer all wrapped up in one package. You explained that it was for everyone and true that is.. for many of us guys have felt like the Silly Boy as well. You have a special talent for trimming off the fat and leaving only the quintessential words of your themes. Every line packs a knockout punch. You never seem to have to set it up. It's very difficult with such candid speech, but the risk is worth the reward of genuine emotion. Kudos for making it look easy. In the hands of most writers...this teknik would turn out to be a disaster.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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LeDiisco
LeDiisco

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