Short. Sweet. Simple.

Honestly, This isn't one of my best poems. I think I literally wrote it in about 5 minutes. But it works.

Hopeless romantic

Broken Heart,

Wishful thinker,

Torn apart. 

Optimistic future,

Pessimistic past. 

I'll take the good first,

Leave the bad for last. 

Theres something more

From something small.

Before you walk.

You learn to crawl.

My hero is me. 

In charge of my path.

Don't stay too serious.

Just try to laugh.

We all make mistakes. 

Some bad, some good. 

If we work real hard.

We do more then we could. 

Look for the bright side.

Sing like the world is your stage.

When life gets too rough,

Just turn to the next page. 

Reviews

[Zeek4]

Good job. I enjoyed your poem and the message.

[Jazrak]

eeek!?
...did not even read the "5min note" above... this was brilliant then =)

[Jazrak]

...tightly written; dare I say well thought out.

[Grim]

Many thoughts that most of us face every single day, but written in amazing way.

[LostinKristina]

For something written in five minutes I find this to be really good.
I can't wait to read more of your work and I am happy I stumbled upon your account. (:

[Zen Wolf]

beautifully written :)

[Aishwarya Subramanian]

nice. i like the contrast in the alternate lines.