Creeper

lol This one is completely random... but it makes me laugh =3

Creeper oh creeper how you sit and stare. 

Pretending like i cant see you sitting over there.

Watching my every move as if its my last. 

Do i remind you of someone you knew in your past?

I notice your there, and the way that you look.

You cant keep pretending your reading that book.

It makes me feel odd and it makes me feel weird

Especially the fact that you have a long beard. 

Can you please go away? Im trying to work.

But still you stay and remain to lurk.

Your not even cute, if you were i'd mind less.

Honestly you look like a complete mess.

So please go away. Creep on someone new. 

Im sure they will want you to go away too. 

Reviews

[VanillaNinja13]

HAHA! I love it! I can actually imagine you writing this as he's staring at you in like a cafe or something. lol I like the rhymes too, very creative.

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

Very funny. I can picture him. Eeewwww!

One thing caught my eye. 'Your' in the 3rd and 6th stanza should be 'you're'. :)

Thanks for the giggle!

~Truly

[DeePurpleLavender]

I loved this poem. It is surprisingly funny and creative. I am sure that a lot of people (including me) has encountered a creeper before and can relate to it! XD

[Alskar]

There's something sinister with the creepy character that makes this so interesting to read.

[Bare trees]

Funny with great rhythm and rhymes. I liked it.

[pamzilla. &hear..]

I like this poem, it's a relief from the normal sad, depressing or horrific poems on WC.
Creepers are fun to confront. Just hearing them stumble over their explanations is so amusing.
It's fun to creep people too. But only creep your friemds, it's gonna get weird if you creep people you don't know xD

[Kourtnie]

This was pretty funny! I loved it! It's very good writing and you don't get off track. Good work! I can't wait to read more!

[Steve]

This is funny! I like it. I'm sure though that you must get that a lot?

[Raymond]

Okay I laughed! I like it...and often hear the term "creeper" from my kids. I'm no poet so I'm not qualified to tell you about "form and mechanics"...but it was a fun read...great job.