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Compartment 114
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Then I Blinked

Then I Blinked

A Poem by LeDiisco

I blinked. 


I was happy with life. It had its ups and downs and I had almost everything for me going. Things couldn’t get better.


Then I blinked.


I lost important people and I realized I was going to lose more. Time was wasting, and I wasn’t so happy anymore.... I felt alone and knew I was going to lose the people I had.


Then I blinked. 


Things were getting slightly better. Although I lost them.... I found tranquility in another and moved on. Things around me changed. My home, my friends and my family. A new start can be good.. Right?


Then I blinked.


Things looked amazing. With a bit more time, things could go so right. I could have it all.... All I need is things to stay constant... Then maybe I will have it made.


Then I blinked.


It was all gone. Everything. Gone. Feelings. People. Life.... And now I am forced to start all over again. The funny thing? None of it was my fault. Why do these things happen?


Then I blinked.


And things were getting better. I found where I belong for the time being. I am not happy, but now a days... who is? I am living and I still have time to change everything.... What am I scared of? 


When will I blink next....

© 2011 LeDiisco


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:) great

Posted 13 Years Ago


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we're all on the same roller coaster but some of us take the ride a little harder than others.

Posted 13 Years Ago


down right creative little piece--I too loved it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved the structure and the flow of this poem I really enjoyed the concept of after every blink something new is happening you emit great emotion and I am really glad that I found such a clearly gifted writer well done I shall view more of your work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great! Just great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it. Things that are taken away so slowly seem to be gone so quickly when you look back on it. Like a blink of the eye.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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LeDiisco
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Hey. My name is C. Lee. Im 26 and im not much of a writer.... but I love to write, so I do. I try to stick to things I have gone through, but sometimes I just write about things that I hear about. more..

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