Sorrento

Its been a long time since I've posted anything, final year exams and all, hope you like this!

In dusty streets

Lay dusty dreams

As the sunset speaks

In sanguine streams.

 

On shim’ring Capris

A tongue of sea

Laps a lonely beach

In azure peace

 

In sweltering haze

And Sun’s turgid glaze

We find subtle beauty

In a lost community.

Reviews

[Into_The_Cosmos]

I could just picture the scene as I read this. It beautifully written and truly captured the imagery you sought for.

[gabrielle]

The vivid image you created in here made me want to watch the sunset at the stream and spend my day lying on that pristine beach. I enjoyed reading this.

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Thank you!

[Rita L. Sev]

This poem made my just breath in the imagery - lovely and vivid. The first stanza sets a beautiful scene. Well done!

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Thank you!

[SyberRose]

Loved it Lewis...very nice...and loved the photo...Rose

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Thank you!