Meditate

Meditate

A Poem by Lewis Davis-Norman
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Something different from me. Possibly my deepest yet. Hope you like it!

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Rhythmically, the mind will break

With waves of calm upon the beach

Of life. A Goldcrest of serenity

Flutters out of its womb with grace.

Let’s meditate.

 

Lower your arms for a lifetime

And you can ride the crests of calm

The gift of sight can be abused

By those who seek a world of greed

Let’s meditate.

 

Life is forever, yet too short

To damage what we have, spreading

Evil from our poison tongues

So close your eyes and pulsate peace.

Meditate with me.

© 2013 Lewis Davis-Norman


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I love the line "Life is forever, yet too short." So true. Good use of repitition.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very peaceful. I especially love "ride the crests of the calm." This is very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tranquil and Serene and peaceful write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Its really good one , well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


this piece has a very calming effect on me. beautifully written. thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


what a zen, calm, peaceful entry! Very well written, smooth and gentle as a delicate wave... Let's meditate indeed...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Pulsate peace.... That is amazing. This poem really gives me pause and I like that. Very well written. Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem sets the mind soaring, above the world, but looking down and seeing ruin. Yet we are removed, serene in a world of chaos.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love how these words paint a picture for you, Took my emotions to another place.
Love the piece. Great work Lewis.!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very meaningful, without being complicated and overly-philosophical. Great lines were "Evil from our poison tongues" and "A Goldcrest of serenity" they sounded beautiful :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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